I like this - "contact us to discuss alternatives"

How current is our list of other rescues?


On Tue, Jun 14, 2011 at 9:38 PM, Vincent J. Hrovat <1217@vhrovat.org> wrote:

Please see attached, with the following change:

 

>We are not closing our doors forever - just for as long as is necessary

 

Is now:

 

>We regret that we’re forced to do this and we will not be turning away birds any longer than necessary

 

Everything else is the same as on Pam’s version 2.

 

--VH

 

From: media-advisors-bounces@mickaboo.org [mailto:media-advisors-bounces@mickaboo.org] On Behalf Of Michelle Yesney
Sent: Tuesday, June 14, 2011 9:20 PM
To: Mickaboo media advisor team
Subject: Re: [Media-advisors] website message - drafting continued

 

Actually, I don't care for the phrase "closing our doors" at all, and would prefer that we say we "will not be turning away new intakes for any longer than is absolutely necessary", or something similar.