Please see attached, with the following change:
We are not closing our doors forever - just for as long as is necessary
Is now:
We regret that we're forced to do this and we will not be turning away birds any longer than necessary
Everything else is the same as on Pam's version 2. --VH From: media-advisors-bounces@mickaboo.org [mailto:media-advisors-bounces@mickaboo.org] On Behalf Of Michelle Yesney Sent: Tuesday, June 14, 2011 9:20 PM To: Mickaboo media advisor team Subject: Re: [Media-advisors] website message - drafting continued Actually, I don't care for the phrase "closing our doors" at all, and would prefer that we say we "will not be turning away new intakes for any longer than is absolutely necessary", or something similar.