I think this is excellent. Thanks, Vinny!
-----Original Message-----
From: "Vincent J. Hrovat" <1217@vhrovat.org>
Sent: Jun 11, 2011 6:20 AM
To: 'Mickaboo media advisor team'
Cc: "'Lee, Pamela A'" , 'Kim Flaherty'
Subject: Re: [Media-advisors] Press release for SF ACW proposal (attached)

Thanks Elizabeth. See R3, attached. I knocked the pet stores less, told more about the sorry state that some rescued birds are in, and included a piece from Kim’s great presentation in paragraph 3. I also increased the number from 400 to 600. If we have 256 pigeons, it’s gotta be at least that. (I will worry about why the query was off later.)

 

I did NOT mention Mickaboo’s moratorium, first in the interest of keeping this focused on the AWC topic and second because it could lead people to take that fact out of context and say, Mickaboo’s not taking in any birds at all so screw them. If anybody disagrees with this approach and REALLY thinks that the moratorium should be mentioned, feel free to make your case and I will listen.

 

Thanks.

 

--VH